My idea to put forward to production

After meeting with my production group, we have decided the best way to choose a final idea is to create an online survey on www.surveymonkey.com to post on social networking sites such as twitter and Facebook. The survey will incorporate all of our individual ideas so the audience can give honest feedback on which outline idea they prefer without being bias. The questions we will ask our audience are; 

• Are you male or female?
• How old are you?
• Which idea do you find the most appealing?
• Would you add or change anything from your most preferred idea?

The idea I will be putting forward to production is pitch idea 2 however I want to incorporate a few elements from pitch idea 1. 

A girl is walking along to a train station with her earphones in listening to music, however unknown to her, someone is following her. She sits and waits for her train and pulls out her phone to go on while she's waiting, she texts her boyfriend. As the train passes the girl disappears and her phone has been left on the platform, the caller ID shows her boyfriend calling her. When she comes round, she is tied to a chair with tape across her mouth with two masked people standing behind her. She has flashbacks of the kidnapping at the train station. The kidnappers film a video message of her telling the boyfriend that he must pay them for the drugs (cocaine) he is in debt for, plus interest. She is unaware that he has ever been involved in drugs. The boyfriend trashes his room looking for a gun which is hidden in a box at the back of wardrobe, he goes on a mission to rescue her. At the end there will just be dialogue of one of the kidnappers saying 'You have 24 hours or she dies. Good luck.'